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Winter winds icy
Hands around soft beating hearts,
Doomed to crack in spring.
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~LesserPandaBear Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like haiku, and this is a nice one =3

I like the wording of the first line, the alliteration. I also like the last line, it seems ominous, it's very effective.
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~Dominion-of-Cain Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou, a friend told me try them and I love them now.
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A chilling feel, but I like it.
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~Dominion-of-Cain Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, A friend told me try Haiku and I love them now.
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I love them to.
It’s nice with a set of rules, you just start and thing writes itself :D
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